changes to the first draft..

After the making of our first draft and watching it back a few times we decided that there were a few things we wanted to change to make it better. While editing and fine editing we noticed a few things that we would want to change in hope to strengthen the narrative.

THINGS WE NOTICED THAT WE WOULD CHANGE

1. In the draft it displays 'title here' instead of the actual title - this is something we need to change when creating the final draft.
2. The close ups and pans at the beginning are on the screen for a long time therefore we would like to cut them shorter.
3. There is a continuity error at the end where the garage door is shut but then when you see Josh and Hannah arguing it is open again,therefore this would need to be re-filmed or the arguing shot needs to be cut out completely.

All of these changes can be made when we re-visit the college and are able to re-edit the film. We are happy with what we have created so far as it has helped us come up with loads of ideas that we would like to put into the next edit of the opening.